Reflection on what changed after peer review: 

We got some really good feedback during peer review. The comments that we got were mainly positive but the ones that we took into consideration the most were moving Taylors the UNE students introduction and mission around so that it made better sense and flowed better. We also cut a few things out and made the font at the end with the contact information bigger. We really didn’t have a lot of other negative comments or feedback because I think we did a really good job going  through and nit picking it as a group as much as we could together and by ourselves before we presented it on peer review day.  

Narrative of my role composing the assignment: 

For this project I worked on a lot of the research of what we wanted to make the dishwasher out of and what we wanted to make our soap out of to ensure that we are sticking with our environmentally friendly theme. I also found the research for why using a dishwasher is better than hand washing. I found the stats that we used in the news release and helped edit and create a few of the quotes that were used. I was in charge of the call to action part and decided to come up with the 10% off for the first 100 customers at our warehouse location. I also decided to make Isabella our point of contact and added her fake email and number at the bottom. My group really worked together and discussed everything through before we would put it on the document so I had input on the logo and the quotes and everything else that was being put into the document as well.

First Draft

FINAL NEWS RELEASE